Thinking Poem by Eric Pennington

Thinking

Rating: 5.0


I think daily what I have to do to achieve happiness,
I wonder why, why it has to be like this.
I think of how things get so confusing,
I go to my quiet place, and begin musing.

I think why I have to go through such torture,
I wonder why all I ever do is think about her.
And what it is that I do so wrong,
I think, think hard and long.

Is it because I care too much?
Or maybe I just don't have that touch.
Is it that I come on too strong?
I really wish I knew what I do wrong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 19 July 2007

You have made your point well, but have you consider listening to what she may be thinking too. Good piece Eric, worth 10.

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