Thirty Minutes Together Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Thirty Minutes Together

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When destiny threw them together
for thirty minutes

they heard each other's heartbeats

thirty minutes together
they were pair

he preened her feather
she spread her bare

don't love me
I'll soon go away
he said broken voice

this thirty minutes together
I'll cherish forever
in her voice rejoice

and end of time
they went their way

you love don't mean

you would forever stay.

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 09 July 2014

In thirty minutes time, a beautiful relationship developed and withered! Still it was worth it 'he preened her feather she spread her bare'......... enjoyed these lines more!

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Lorraine Colon 07 July 2014

Perhaps 30 minutes is better than nothing. Well written.

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