This Heart Of Mine.. Poem by Rick Adriolo
This Heart Of Mine..
It's a hard beating, hard beating
they got this time..
It's a hard feeling, hard feeling
I did this crime..
It's a strange beating, strange beating
In this heart I hide..
It's a strange feeling, strange feeling
I feel inside..
It's a heavy beating, heavy beating
To tell how deeply they are hated..
It's a heavy feeling, heavy feeling
when to them you are related..
It's a cold beating, cold beating
this heart so hollow..
It's a cold feeling, cold feeling
this bitterness and sorrow..
A very heartfelt write. The heart is the center of all emotions. Your poem has a good tune to it. Inspired.
This could be put to music and make you famous someday. Nice write.
I like the rythmn in this one, and the repeat lines. Very good job.
I like the way your poem rhymes, and like the expressions u chose :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 5:49:26 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice piece of work. Yes, life is full of many negative things. All the same, let us all try to do the right thing always. E.K.L.