This Heavy Rain Poem by Saliha AHU

This Heavy Rain

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Hopefully,
we are living through the
storm
after which
a rainbow will be born.

Hopefully,
this heavy rain
will water our souls;
this dry selfish soil
into purified maturity.

Hopefully,
in the approaching future
many plants will grow
on this fertile land
despite the troubles
yet to come.

Ahu
09102012 8: 13

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The rainbow will soon arise
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 May 2018

Beautiful motivational piece of poetry, written with clarity of thought and mind. Nicely crafted with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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blank blank 02 January 2015

The troubles have come and stayed I lived that life and then returned periodically and I see what i could have done better My passion is just too strong but it must be tamed I can see that the land was not tilled after that long wait so a shorter but (close to) equally painful wait was yet to be suffered And I did. Hopefully now many plants will grow on this humble land although i understand with this heavy passion of mine life is tough. Oh Allah, nothing is easy except that which you make easy. and you can make grief be easy if You will

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Agonizing 17 November 2017

The tongue of word became paralyzed Strong words landed on its ears and cut all its sensations All it can do now is dua . . Forgiveness

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Valerie Dohren 28 October 2012

Hopefully these dreams will happen - great write.

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