This House Is A Home Poem by lilly mandrell
This House Is A Home
Walk in
Open eyes.
See faces
Of loved ones
Step back
Just listen
Hear sounds.
Of happy people.
Come in
Keep relaxed.
Inhale smells
Of wonderful sorts.
Sit down
Take a bite.
Taste joy
Of good food.
Open arms
Hold tight.
Feel warmth
Of someone else.
you spelled bite, bight..oh well, i make mistakes too. I like this poem anyways, good job.
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4/25/2024 5:30:06 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It sounded a bit awkward in some parts (perhaps some rhyming may have helped perfectify it, although it isn't necessary) . I like the same pattern you have flowing through each of the stanzas with the last line always beginning with 'of.' Good writing and subject choice.