christane darling

Rookie - 8 Points (7-11-96 / georgia)

This Is Goodbye - Poem by christane darling

Who would have thought the day would come, when I'd look at you and say, 'I'm sorry, but you're not 'The One'.'
You're not the one who will make me laugh, you're not the my life, my world, my other half. You're not about to be the shoulder I cry on.
I've known for a while now, but baby I'm done.
I'm done with you're games and all you're lies.
Don't know how much more I can take, how much more my eyes can cry.
I thought I could deal with it and I'd be just fine.
But after all this time I realize my heart was blind.
I'm sorry but this is what I need to do.
I need to forget you and start over new.
I can't do this anymore.
I'm tired of picking my heart off the floor.
I have to do this for my own good.
And not because people are telling me to, but because I know I should.
So I guess this is it, I guess this is goodbye


Comments about This Is Goodbye by christane darling

  • Rookie - 36 Points Sandy Player (1/11/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    its worded the doubt and disbelieve of when it comes to that moment. very intense, yet softening. great (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 35 Points A Lifetime Of Fame (1/17/2012 6:48:00 PM)

    Wow. I can feel where you are coming from. Very nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Francy Lowachee (1/12/2012 5:30:00 PM)

    This poem was really good.. I was thinking if I was the guy this was said to I'd be speech less.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Robert Roberts (1/12/2012 4:37:00 PM)

    sweet writing i like that but the say love is blind and that everyone needs a try right but we move on and we get up after we fall down. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Brianna Winebarger (1/12/2012 1:44:00 PM)

    good. sad and heat felt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelsey Phillips (1/12/2012 1:20:00 PM)

    i love your poem it almost made me cry everything will be okay (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, January 13, 2012


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