This Is My Life Poem by lady grace

This Is My Life

Rating: 5.0


soft waft on my skin
dewdropp on my cheeks
reminds me of the time
immature and childish..

laughter
filled the empty room
playing dolls and boards
no sign of worries
no signs of troubles..

lot of things happen
as life go on
there are tears of joy
some are tears of failures..

sometimes life changes gradually
or ends abruptly… unexpected
but I assure... life is beautiful
it is very very beautiful
depending on how to accept it..


09/09/09naizxenia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 07 September 2009

The 'me' in this poem echoing many lives! beautiful wording! the last line encompassed all......... 10+

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Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Happy celebration of life... This is a beautiful poem Well written. Grace As always 10 Its your life live it right Keep smiling

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2009

A beautiful expression of joy in life - - and you write with a flair - a delight to read - - thank you.....10 + ++ Fay

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Obinna Eruchie 08 September 2009

Memories of joy delightfully expressed.

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Ency Bearis 08 September 2009

a nice life embrace....a beautiful poem indeed.....10

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Rafique Farooqi 22 September 2009

Sweet memories with..........emerging abrupt changes......well done grace......

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

yo recibir................

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 September 2009

this is life... so complete... a combination of joy, happiness, pain and sorrow builds a beautiful life... ...life is really beautiful...the evidence of God's greatest love to us... the Gift of life.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

sometimes life changes gradually or ends abruptly… unexpected but I assure... life is beautiful it is very very beautiful depending on how to accept it..life is God's greatest and kind gift and no one has right to end it.. we must face bravely and accept the way it has been granted to us... pray always for what HE has done to us.......10 read mine o, lord...prayer....prayer for friend

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

Well expressed poem about joy of life. Lovely to read it Enjoyed. Thanks

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