This Map, Me Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

This Map, Me

Rating: 5.0


THIS darkness splinterd my light,
leaving my muscle and bone sore
to the touch, but alive, still your
beatifull shadow breaks my fall.
THIS wretched trap squeezes my
wrist, and in its place, plastic
handcuffs, still your shadow breaks
my fall.

then i fall into a trance, like a untidy
ghost, and fold myself into a map,
this map, , , , , , me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 13 October 2006

My favorite line is your first :) Very unique introspection.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 October 2006

So many awesome lines in such a succinct piece....excellent write David...(10) '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ruby Root 13 October 2006

Very creative David. Excellent poem. Take care.

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