This Morning In The Southwest Balcony Poem by indira babbellapati

This Morning In The Southwest Balcony

Rating: 5.0


the first rays of the sun
penetrated into the house
bright and pointed
from the eastern door
untouched by the sun
we sat on the other end
in the southwest balcony
quietly over a cup of tea
the savoring warm liquid
causing the insides cuddle
tickling the chillness out
above us the sky began to
assume its exclusive azure
filling the winter precincts
and feasting the heavy eyes
i lifted the sleepy lashes to
absorb the blue and it’s then
i saw you transforming
into the blue sky…

my winged mind
floated like a joyous
cloud against the
blue back drop

05nov2009
06.54hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leonard Dabydeen 01 March 2010

Read this poem 2X, just to place the panorama of the southern balcony in my mind while I am enjoying my cup of tea. And what a classic moment to enjoy a sip of the brew! You've captured the atmosphere with beautiful imagery. Blessings. Leonard

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Obinna Eruchie 08 November 2009

'my winged mind / floated like a joyous / cloud against the / blue back drop.' What a beautiful moment over a cup of tea in the southwest balcony in the morning you have painted.

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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'Quietly over a cup of tea the savoring warm liquid' Rachel Ann Butler

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Ranjit Ravindran 05 November 2009

I like to be bathed by the soft sunlight. During my school days I use to lie down on my back on the terrace, reading a book as well as shielding my face with it, rejuvenating myself in the sunray spa.

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Sonya Florentino 05 November 2009

a blissful moment you capture so beautifully....morning glory.....

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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