This Night Is Like Poem by rahul sharma

This Night Is Like

Rating: 4.9


This night is like a story,
in which a woman is waiting for her lover.
This night is like a book,
in which reader is trying to understand the feelings of the writer.
This night is like a war,
which is waiting for its end to see peace.
This night is like a poet,
who is searching for words to complete his poem.
This night is waiting for dawn to complete it and,
I am waiting for right girl to complete me..................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a poet does wait for words................ they source......... i do not no.

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Ranjit Ravindran 09 September 2009

Good work rahul..Keep it going...God bless you.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 October 2009

a beautiful last line which crowns the poem...10

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Anand Madhukar 20 October 2009

A simple and sweet write.

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sweet really sweet! ! ! :) ++10++\++10++nice work! ! ! :)

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Sherri Coulter 11 September 2009

mmmmm.........I read and between lines feel I am 1/2 of this equation.10/10

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Mystic Indian 10 September 2009

longing and waiting from different points of view. i wish you wrote a longer version and the ending could have been different/sharper.10/10

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