Jemima Rivas


This Toy Is Broken - Poem by Jemima Rivas

Life is this road I’m walking
Still is this peace am feeling
When am down am down
When am up am up
When am walking this road, empty is this hate am feeling
I’ve lost my twin not to marriage but to a broken heart
Can but two broken hearts mend?
I’m on the shelf am waiting
People past and stare and envy at my outstanding marvellous beauty
What they don’t know is that I’m on the shelf because I’m broken 


Comments about This Toy Is Broken by Jemima Rivas

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/24/2016 6:56:00 AM)

    When am down am down
    When am up am up
    When am walking this road, empty is this hate am feeling
    I’ve lost my twin not to marriage but to a broken heart
    Can but two broken hearts mend?
    I’m on the shelf am waiting

    Oh dear poet...this one is a classic one.
    I just loved every word of it.
    It was a pleasurable reading.
    Thanks for sharing the poem.
    I invite you to my page and to give your valuable rating and remarks on my poems.
    10 for this poem.. Thanks.
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  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/20/2014 8:35:00 AM)

    Woah aha attractive eh! Gorgeous to read. Real life's interesting styled poem! Tc. (Report) Reply

    Jemima Rivas Jemima Rivas (4/26/2015 11:06:00 AM)

    thank you :)

  • John Westlake John Westlake (2/26/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    Very nice. However even the most broken heart can be mended. Hopefully yours can be to in time (Report) Reply

    Jemima Rivas Jemima Rivas (4/26/2015 11:08:00 AM)

    :)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2014


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