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maxpoet beauty


This World is crucial,


This World,
This World is all crucial crucial,
This time's are harder,
Every breathe,
I can see my own graffiti,
That this world is in turmoil,

We create false and say true,
All I see is not good in killing burdens,
There are many idiots out there that can ruin,
Maybe I can compose another thought from own earthly spirits,
It's us who made this world,
Whilst we deny deny being laced up by true knowledge,
Whilst we deny the New World.

Submitted: Thursday, October 30, 2008
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  • marvin brato (10/30/2008 5:57:00 AM)

    As predicted this world is doomed, better we make the most of our little time than cry! Good one. (Report) Reply

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