Those Tempting Sandwiches! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Those Tempting Sandwiches!



December fun fare was going on
Sandwiches of tempting varieties that attracted many eyes!

Club sandwich
Grilled sandwich
Vegetable sandwich
Chicken sandwich
Plain sandwich
Spicy sandwich
Jam sandwich
Angry sandwich
Lovely sandwich
Hatred sandwich
Laughter sandwich
Well there were many more of varieties
Names you might have not heard before!

I got hooked to a tag written below...
Begin your day with Laughter sandwich
To look beautiful and young ever!
My thoughts got sandwiched between the words
I gulped the laughter sandwich to look younger.
On seeing my funny face people mocked at me.

Competition was going on eat to all sandwiches in 5min.
Just got tempted to relish all those sandwiches
I too joined competition.
I gulped it all at once
But I felt all sandwiches got mixed in my stomach
They started running, churning and burning inside me.
They started striking me badly.
Now they started raining and draining me heavily!

I was excited when I was declared the winner.
I was too thrilled to see the surprise gift.
I saw a beautifully packed big gift for the winner.
It just left me wondered, what it could be?
But all my thrills got killed when
I got a jumbo size sandwich as a prize!
On seeing it I fainted
I was taken to hospital
Doctor said...
No more sandwiches for you!

Well how can I forget my prize
I kept it frozen as my sweet remembrance!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 September 2014

A very lovely poem with alluring taste of sandwiches hovering over the sweet remembrance towards the closure of the year.........Geetha.......a great write with a great taste

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2014

Thoughts get sandwiched between words. Nice expression and beautiful lines.

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Kee Thampi 17 September 2014

I got hooked to a tag written below... Begin your day with Laughter sandwich To look beautiful and young ever! My thoughts got sandwiched between the words life beyond the holy Ganga bath............................ nicely hooked in life

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Akhtar Jawad 17 September 2014

When Geetha is in a funny mood, he makes his reader a sandwich of laughter and enjoyment. Well wrote Geetha.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 September 2014

This World too is a fare where we eat ant fall sick 'The sandwiches ' Geetha, if we put T witches of the Sand..lovely expression as a whole

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Amitava Sur 15 September 2014

Ha Ha Ha... Geetha..... I enjoyed seeing a sandwiched Geetha within so many sandwiches ! ! ! ! ! After gulping, she is yawning , wobbling and...... about to vomit..........

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Valsa George 13 September 2014

Oh, my God, I thought when the sandwiches were churning and burning inside, you were about to throw them up! Thank Heavens, it didn't happen....! This is such a humorous write, Geetha! Enjoyed much!

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