Thoughts Poem by tianna graham

Thoughts



My mind drew a blank as I sank into my ocean of dreams. My imagination swims wildly through my memories from the past to the present, through the good and the bad, through the additions and the subtractions. When that day came, that horrifying day, I awoke screaming as I saw the look on her face. I started to cry. I looked around the room. It was dark. I thought it was just a dream but I was wrong. It wasn't a dream, and she really is sick. For awhile things looked really bad. I settled down and went back to sleep. This time I dreamt about the good old days where there was no illness and no worries. It was then that I remembered when he came into my life. He was so cute and funny, we grew up together. I thought I was in love, true love. It is now 6 am and it is still dark as I get ready for the day ahead. I look out my window and see a shooting star, I make a wish. I wished for everything to go back to being normal again, and I wished he was back in my arms.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 12 June 2008

This is really a good entry to a diary or some novel about love. I'm glad the author chose this form because this is the proper form for this kind of writing. I want to pay tribute to that alone because it is most worthy of that. GW62

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tianna graham

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london ontario
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