Thoughts And Me Poem by Muhammad Ali

Thoughts And Me

Rating: 5.0


One...
Though, there are scenes in billion
If every eye can read the slogan!

Two...
I am to live within all of you!
O God, if my dream comes true! !

Three...
I become bored, so long being 'me'
If I were a flower, a star... or a tree! !

Four...
What I am made of! my coat and core?
So harsh, so calm, so sweet, so sore!

Five...
We are the waves, till shore we survive...
You are the OCEAN... Live and Live!

Friday, January 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

one... two...three...four...five...the 'wave' dies out here in the lap of the 'shore'...beautiful insightful stanzas Ali...the last one is really good...a truth very beautifully told there...10

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

pretty nice thought provoking composition writen with numbers for enumeration...10

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Seema Aarella 10 February 2009

Your thoughts are vibrant and profound.an assortment of a different emotive ideas. Very beautifully scripted! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Good luck!

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Wojja Fink 03 April 2009

swim in the ocean of love Ali...sing to us more....John

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Merna Ibrahim 03 April 2009

Sweet explanation to your thoughts....great title too. Well written....Merna

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Mj Lemon 04 August 2018

The counting is an anchor...as we give in to it, we focus and our vision becomes clearer...A terrific poem, Ali.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 January 2017

A thought provoking poem......................................................

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Susan Williams 16 January 2017

I like the counting- adds a distinctive touch to the piece. Well-penned!

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Nosheen Irfan 04 August 2016

Very profound piece of work. Written with flair n poetic intuition. Filled with wisdom. Full marks.

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Shahzia Batool 27 December 2013

a different and quite original write up! ! ! ! ! !

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