Thoughts In Darkness Poem by BRANDEN B. BRANDEN

Thoughts In Darkness



Like steam in a dark room, there's a feeling inside
A feeling that feels like it's trying to hide
A feeling that's awkward in the back of the room
A feeling that breaks and sticks in shards in my gloom
A feeling that feels like the darkened clouds in the sky
A feeling that's black like coal in my eye
There's a dent in my mind, like the feeling in its womb
There's a feeling inside, like steam in a dark room

Wednesday, July 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saket Mishra 28 July 2011

Its rhythmic.Lots of feelings pass through the mind when we cannot view anything, but its equally hard to get hold of one or two and depict it.That's where your poem comes into play.A nice read.

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Keith Foley 27 July 2011

Thought provoking, keep writing. Thanks - cool stuff.

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