hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Thoughts Spoil Too - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Which kind valley is rich heritage?
That produces beautiful thoughts in all ages
As child you have fancy for fairies
Then gradually it varies

As student, you are eager to acquire
Build new image for future
Earn fame and get position
Life can be thrown open for new relation

What do you think generally?
It does not concern you really
As everything is uncertain
Some thoughts do cause pain

Well, let us not give more consideration
As it will fill pages with indication
It may pay dividend if planned in advance
Rest all is depended on chance

Thoughts after thoughts spoil too
Too much of caution can not make you avail
Real opportunity that is needed
Only right things can be conceded


Comments about Thoughts Spoil Too by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    excellent poem


    Michelle Bay9 minutes ago
    I enjoyed this poem. great work.
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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    nice one there


    H.e. Innocenzy ApomaLess than a minute ago
    line 16 you believe in chance, i believe in faith
    I give you thumbs up your poem is good
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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    good


    Sangram Parida9 minutes ago
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  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/25/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    real opportunity that is needed, thanks sir. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    Which kind valley is rich heritage?
    That produces beautiful thoughts in all ages (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014



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