tallulah montegue


Thoughts That Go Round In My Head - Poem by tallulah montegue

Funny how things pop out of your head
Words that have been said
Songs that go round and round in your brain
That can make you weep again and again

A touch remembered that sparked jealousy
Or deliberate moves used as emotional weaponry
While sitting and watching helplessly
Thoughtless actions by loved ones
Cruel and merciless as being shot by guns

Sitting and watching all this is painful
Behaviours disrespectful and disgraceful
feelings are hurt, pain is searing
Urges to get up and run is overpowering
One's psyche needs airing

Removing one's self is imperative
Should be the self narative
From these kinds of situations
Or one can end up feeling dead
On a mental hospital bed


Comments about Thoughts That Go Round In My Head by tallulah montegue

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/9/2014 7:56:00 PM)

    Those thoughts tease, provoke, aggitate, and grate on the nerves.
    You are right, probably best to escape elsewhere. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 28 Points Tallulah Montegue (8/10/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    Thanks Thomas

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  • Gold Star - 16,104 Points Mandolyn ... (8/6/2014 7:10:00 PM)

    removing oneself is imperative
    ending up on a hospital bed....
    nice write. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 28 Points Tallulah Montegue (8/10/2014 12:18:00 AM)

    Thanks Mandolyn

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 7, 2014


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