Thougts Poem by Asif Baloch

The imagery of sadness and regret well expressed. Ten for your genuine thoughts. Kind regards, Sandra

'On my effort way I’m stuck in the Mud of slimy thoughts' true words there...i liked 10

Somewhat dark but wonderful outburst of emotions. I also love the lines quoted by Poet Kesav.

were you depressed when you wrote this? It kind of reminds of a painting called 'The Scream'.Everyone gets days like that.

Guilt compels us to lethargy then to desolation, the only way to exit from there is to confess and seek forgiveness.

a fabulous description of self mortification. well done. some changes to be considered. viberate - viberated [past tense], hairs- hair [hare has no plural], ought - ought to have done

desperate drowning words of one who desires to escape his past.....but finds the effort too great.

wow it was sad, it was nice.. keep writing! ! ~Hazel G.E

From the Muse of a very good poet

Man's mind always gives out paradoxical thoughts; one of joy and one of sorrow. especially when alone. Your poem well explains the complexities of mind and thought..............10