Throw The Customs Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Throw The Customs

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Throw the customs and tradition
That has attached condition
Follow the conscience
That has little patience

Reject people for simple reason
Who wants to become over night rich man
They may be your relative
But prove true and try to be selective

Cut the tree that has only grown
Giving no fruit and has remained unknown
Love only those who care for needy
Throw them out if found guilty and greedy

Crate new building on new foundation
If that fails to prove standardization
It stands good for society and country
Some changes are good and necessary

“Adopt tough stand against corrupt people”
The legend says they will prove hurdle with struggle
If system has become useless and unproven
Never expect good spring and heaven

Out of ten at least two people may be worth
Put little trust and push them forward
They may prove with change of cycle
The country needs them and so the people

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Throw the customs and tradition That has attached condition

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Excellent krishna Middela5 minutes ago Good Comment 0 Excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Rees Buck9 minutes ago Deep message that underlies the poem entirely - put adeptly in different ways throughout. Out of ten at least two people may be worth - perhaps even fewer as time goes on.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Thought provoking... KR BALAKRISHNAN3 minutes ago A sincere poem; but is it not hard to cut a tree simply because it is not yielding? May be, the fault with the environments. Anyway, I agree with your other views; the poem is beautiful. Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

ok malenky malenky6 minutes ago nice Comment 0 Life

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2013

Robyn Alectus9 minutes ago I think it shows the decisions people make, good or bad.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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