Ticket Of Dreams Poem by GJC boyle

Ticket Of Dreams

Rating: 3.8


Would you like visit the stars
What about mercury
Or even mars
There is not that much space between us
If i took a long jump could i land on venus
Then hitch a ride to jupiter or saturn
Then we could maybe catch a bus
To neptune and uranus
Come on lets go
We will even visit pluto
Then get a one way ticket back to earth
Imagine how much this trip would be worth
Maybe i have spoken to soon
But we have been to space
And even the moon
Way to hot to visit the sun
Lets keep dreaming for now but it would be fun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gwenevere Cornwell 20 September 2012

I really like this poem. It hints at adventures, and I felt like I was joining you on one. Truly briliant.

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Payal Parande 17 September 2012

what a brilliant write sir absolutely entertaining as i was reading you piece with each word i was thinking maybe you do have a power and you will take me out in space and how incredible and brilliant poet you must be to put life into your words well sir you got yourself a fan............ thank you for sharing, love payal

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