Till The Shiny Day Poem by Zaarah Jasmin

Till The Shiny Day

Rating: 4.3


I don't know how and where from i start.
All i want to say is everybody have a dream in their life.
But not all what we want we've get.
Some are come true some are not and mine are related with love for someone to prove how he mean into my life.


I really treasure these relationship cus he is apart of my life.
I'd love to see him everyday how he used the good in every way cus he and only he could stole my heart.
What most hurting me
is when knowing that there's a huge wall standing between us;
were separated by time
and the distance.

Somehow, i know that never change anything to me cus all i want is to make them come true.
But, sometime when thing never happened the way
we wan't it, when we almost there and grapst it but it slipped from our life just like a quick-silver...

Why, Over again this word playing on my mind, but i can't find any answer.
Why love will turn
someone into worry and fear.
I've been thinking about
this since the thing happened i left to reply him.

They say life is unfair yes
it's true and i do believe that sometime life can be
so unfair to us.
But never about someone saying that life is,
unfaithful life is a game
like hide-and-seeking.

I've come to realised and trying to figure out some reason.
I make a guess this time, but still i wanna listen some truth from him.
Convince him not to worried anything cus whatever he say it would be acceptable.
Where as we've know there is REALITY and FATE.

I don't know how far we can go and hide from reality.
When truth is revealed and all the things whatsover it would do to him even so to me, it makes me worry
and fear to know what would happened then.
When faith are agains't
the will we've might end up in a hatred way frustrated and feeling depressed.

I couldn't count all on love to find it ways and embrace our heart.
How fortune if i could turn dream into reality.
Cus he and only he could painted a smile on my face.
He and only he filled my empty life with laughter's and spoil me with lots of love.
All i wan't is a sincerity on love and to make it come true.
'Till the shiny day dreaming of Paradise...'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 17 May 2018

Nice thoughts of a heart in love. Readers understand your emotion and feelings, but there are many spelling and construction errors in the poem, which you would do well to edit, to make the poem nicer.

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Maxim Muyu 04 January 2009

this is very interesting writing.

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Vaibhav Pandey 22 December 2008

thoughts are worth reading but it needs some correction.

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This is good.. But you need to type this up differently.. I love the words and the poem itself though great work Krista

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 November 2008

Compact.........lovely.........thoughtful composition... Your first poem, My first 10 and first comment to you! :)

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