Till We Are At The End Of Horizon Poem by Unwritten Soul
Till We Are At The End Of Horizon
This numbness I have from the winter
Lock the coldness on my skin
To be felt and to forget the warm
As if fire never exist
Cause heart to grief
How long it can control,
Not forever
Once the trail of hope will return
It'll be like a spring that change
Maybe it just by a little touch
But enough to beautify mind, greening heart
Back to nature once again
Like the summer rain
The warm teardrops over my face
And nothing can calm me as it does
Summer rain from cloud nine pain
And feel like living again
Those days now past as green turned to yellow
Like falling leaves from the same tree
Like an autumn remedy,
Scar on the land...covered
Hidden and seen no more
We could run to the horizon
But we wont see the end, never we will
So sometimes i dont want to think too much ahead
Because it is too far to wander now
Im afraid too early to be lost
If i do, if i do
Without wisdom on my compass
Without forgiveness in this life
We are somewhere in this circle
Living in seasonal life change
Again and again it keeps rotating the same
Of good and bad days
Till no fears be scared no more
Till we brave enough to face
We still have seasonal life in heart to wear
In our days
In our years
Thanks for reading :)
The poem is about a situation or a moment in our life that sometimes is hard to bearable/withstand sometimes..However what we faced in life is similar to seasons...it get cold and slowly healed and be strong again. In this poem i started with reference of winter to spring and summer and covered by autumn at last. It maybe not a beautiful poetry, but i think it is worth to share my artistic view of life as seasons...Because till we stand at the horizon line we will face different challenges and possibility that may treat our mind & hearts.
Your poemfilled me with such sadness Soul. The healing...the scars.....our choices. Your pen has touched my soul. From your wisdom and the ancient healing power of nature of the changing seasons your poem carries a rhemedy to rehablitate the down hearted.
Thank you Simone, yes pain always coming without rest, but it mean healing also coming :) Btw How are you? since we both not actively here at PH i cant meet you but i hope you doing fine there have a nice summer! !
As soon as I finished this magnificent poem, I thought of the novel Lost Horizon. There is a quality in your words, Soul, that inspires the search for Shangri-la. Well done.
The journey of life is rotated as a cycle from coldness to hotness or sadness to happiness or vice versa.This poem has been composed relating to this fact on a philosophical base with an introspective eye. It is right to say........ Of good and bad days Till no fears be scared no more Till we brave enough to face We still have seasonal life in heart to wear In our days In our years Beautiful poem. Thanks.
This great poem begins with a sadness reflected by the chill and unfeeling of winter, then slowly transforms with the warming and life giving rays of spring and summer, and ends with understanding and forgiveness and the ever changing patterns of the seasons as reflected in our lives. A very deep and introspective write, my dear friend Soul.
to forget the warm As if fire never exist- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -We are a creature of the present. We often forget the warm memories of the past in the tangles of the present. the trail of hope will return It'll be like a spring that change Maybe it just by a little touch But enough to beautify mind, greening heart Back to nature once again- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I have to tell you how very much I enjoyed this stanza. You kept the poetry flowing so beautifully while making your point. Those days now past as green turned to yellow Like falling leaves from the same tree Like an autumn remedy, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This poem is chock full of really yummy lines, Soul. Very good write! ! ! ! !
Wow so well written, it has rhythm and flow together with the substance, Lovely poem Unwritten Soul..10
Again, thanks for your kind words Asim..you too..keep writing great works :)
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I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderful poem addressing the duality of this world in a melodious and poetic way. Living in the now and thinking not too far ahead, a great wisdom. Excellent work, Soul.
Thank you Hans, life is always seasonal....and the mood is the ambient atmosphere to it.. Hope in our life we will keep be the same person, stay strong..even sun hides or when moon giving up..day and night, season to season..we have our life to make it work, lively and beautiful :)