zip zip

Rookie (10 10 1990 / singapore)

Time - Poem by zip zip

Everyone is running out of time.
'Time is precious' which you had probably heard for more than 100 times.
How you want to spend such precious time?
I would just say it one time.
you must understand how to use time.
Cut down your television time.
Cut down your gaming time.
Increase your exercise time.
Increase your study time.
Most importantly is to make sure that at this time
You tell your family and love ones 'I love you' one by one at a time.

Comments about Time by zip zip

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (8/30/2008 12:22:00 PM)

    Now this is a philosophy that I find to be most agreeable.
    So I gave it an agreeable score of 9.

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  • Rookie Su Guiyao (8/27/2008 2:23:00 PM)

    (informal part)

    okay now i have to go and revise because i have no time!
    examination is starting in no time!
    and after this paper I'll have hell lot of time!
    and please read my poems when you have some free time!
    haha just kidding. remember to treasure time! =) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 2, 2008

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