Time Poem by Andre Brown

Time

Rating: 4.8


Everything exists now, past, future, and present,
As we move through time we make connections in order to improve our development,
Life starts small and progresses with movement,
And slowly but surely we grow to full stature always having room for improvement,
But people are more concerned with having than being,
So they don't believe in the person that they see in their dreams,
We create the time needed to express our true passions,
Yet we allow fear to compel us to contradictory actions,
So our real purpose then is to relay essential information & knowledge, enhancing the collective consciousness of those who are inclined,
Creating a brighter future right now that will all fall into place in the right order at the right time. : B:

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2015

Amazingly brilliant conclusion written explicitly and exactly! Totally agree with your sentiments throughout the poem, it is very well written, insightful and intelligent meaning! Enjoyed this poem immensely! Rhythm is impeccable as is the rhyming! Thank you very much for sharing. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2015

An amazingly brilliant conclusion you have written so explicitly and exactly, very well written! Totally agree with your sentiments throughout the poem. Your rhythm is impeccable, as is your rhyme. Enjoyed reading this poem immensely, insightful and intelligent! Thank you very much for sharing it. RoseAnn

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