Time And Me Poem by simran arora

Time And Me

Rating: 5.0


When time was more,
we were less,
when time declined,
we were raised,
when time departed,
we were still attached,
but now when we both are over,
still time stays....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 July 2013

Yeah time outlasts us. A fine poem in brief. I like it! Hope u read mine too.

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Hazel Durham 06 July 2013

Love this great piece full of wisdom! !

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Itai Oscar 10 July 2013

I like it...deep thinking

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Subodh Pandey 10 July 2013

it goes on forever....lovely write

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Abhishek Mishra 07 July 2013

Though short but nice one: -) ..

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Soulful Heart 07 July 2013

Short n punched wisely.......thoughts so simple n universal

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Vishal Sharma 07 July 2013

wow great lines one of your best

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