Time My Past My Future! ! ! Poem by CHAUNTAE RIDLEY

Time My Past My Future! ! !

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Time My Past My Future
The time is racing my past behind me
NO!
My past in front,
My future behind,
I wasn't thinking of my future,
I was back in my past.
But now this is my story! ! ! !
A mother who did not love me,
A sister a brother trying to comfort me,
I felt all alone
Now inhale
and
Exhale.
My future
A mother, A brother, once upon a time a father,
But no more
I stride for my future,
Not for my past
I tell you children
NEVER Look Back! ! !
But i do wondering......
I f my past was different would my future be better?
Would it?
Never mind that,
The time is racing to my future
I live for today and NOT tomarrow.
So I Never Look Back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Risha : Ahmed 23 January 2008

So much pain in your poem.

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Aaron Combs 18 January 2008

i like the sens of urgency too...

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John Nightingale 16 January 2008

Like how you use time to add urgency to the poem.

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