CHAUNTAE RIDLEY

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Time My Past My Future! ! ! - Poem by CHAUNTAE RIDLEY

Time My Past My Future
The time is racing my past behind me
NO!
My past in front,
My future behind,
I wasn't thinking of my future,
I was back in my past.
But now this is my story! ! ! !
A mother who did not love me,
A sister a brother trying to comfort me,
I felt all alone
Now inhale
and
Exhale.
My future
A mother, A brother, once upon a time a father,
But no more
I stride for my future,
Not for my past
I tell you children
NEVER Look Back! ! !
But i do wondering......
I f my past was different would my future be better?
Would it?
Never mind that,
The time is racing to my future
I live for today and NOT tomarrow.
So I Never Look Back.


Comments about Time My Past My Future! ! ! by CHAUNTAE RIDLEY

  • Rookie - 0 Points Risha : Ahmed (1/23/2008 9:51:00 AM)

    So much pain in your poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aaron Combs (1/18/2008 11:03:00 AM)

    i like the sens of urgency too... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Nightingale (1/16/2008 12:46:00 PM)

    Like how you use time to add urgency to the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 29, 2008


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