Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 46 Points (Montenegro)

Time Out - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Hello fighters time out!
Time to take some rest
Time to take a test
Much a do do over
A high stereo low hysteria
History hystrionic merri-go-mad
A psycho path qu’est que c’est
Ein stain of agony in atom bloom
Cries over its own discovery
Mourns its own invention
Hair astray freedom no recovery
A hell paved in with a good intention
A Nike’s victory at dead end sitting
Chair astray duck electric powered
Freedom aside prison devoured
A branch astray progress knitting
Charlie darling take a deep look at
A root cut bottom of a day
We’ll repent schism of all the –isms
Bruised by sharp ends of prisms
Diamonds brushed for our joy
Funny they end up a psycho toy
Hystrion mimed a day
Hystrions mimed astray
Looney tuney clone
Fool’s paradise throne

Forgive us Father, forgive
For we never really knew
What exactly we were doing
For we haven’t got a clue
On scales of knowledge ruined


Comments about Time Out by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (1/12/2012 3:33:00 PM)

    Really like this, a really great poem. A good write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Human right. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, January 13, 2012


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