jana ghossein

Rookie - 0 Points (25/05/1997 / Lebanon)

Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem) - Poem by jana ghossein

Help how much my heart hurts
my mouth is as dry as a desert
my throught is sore
my voice is a goner
my heart is beating as fast as a tiger
my hand is a rattling snake
my face is a tomato
bye bye, boring life
i cannot take it no more
i lay my head
upon my knee
now blow the whistle refree


Comments about Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem) by jana ghossein

  • (11/26/2016 12:11:00 AM)


    i could barely imagine it but i could really tell that it has really poem like words (Report) Reply

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  • (4/2/2011 5:34:00 AM)


    I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this? (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2011 5:32:00 AM)


    I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 19, 2011



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