Time To Let Go Poem by Vanessa Hughes

Time To Let Go

Rating: 4.4


Like a blow with a fist
That moment I knew
What you did then
And contnue to do

In that instant I knew
What I'd gone through
Was mainly all
Because of you

Yet, I've done nothing wrong
Which you surely must know
All I can think of
You just hate me so

Another lesson learned
And at least I now know
It is time to move on
It is time to let go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Djaafri Youcef 31 July 2012

it's time to let go a certain truth I know yet i can't leave the memory of your kiss of your hiss of your touch I long so much how to let my soul my core my deepen whole how to let my heart go far and do apart I see you learned a lesson and I must learn how to take my heart tho' rapt yat freedom earn nice poem it recalls memories tho' sweet yet painful thank you for the read.

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2012

Well written liked it… Simple crisp and straight yet loaded with sorrow…the ache and hurt of lost love. One picks up courage, as wave upon wave crashes in, some elevating some plunging to the abysmal depths…as life goes on Blessed be Sat

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Paul Gondwe 09 May 2012

I dind this to be very well written. The rhyming kept me glued to the end

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Sekharan Pookkat 20 May 2012

dear poet Hate is a word to hate Love is a word to love And life is a word to remember To live with love and passion

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isam Abdelrahman 21 May 2012

It is a good poem because you said yourself in that moment

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2015

Another lesson learned And at least I now know It is time to move on It is time to let go. liked these lines very much. yes let go is a lesson that we learn that we learn on life's Way. you have presented it in a very fine way. thank you very much. tony

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Kim Barney 23 March 2015

First line: Like a blow with a fist reminded me of my poem NEVER GIVE UP. Keep writing.

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Kim Barney 23 March 2015

Well said. Never been there myself, but I can imagine the pain.

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Chinedu Dike 09 November 2014

A powerful message to all those that are going through distress in relationships. A well articulated poem, well penned to capture the essence of the piece, and the conviction of the poet. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Achill Lad 01 October 2014

Precise and concise. A sad story beautifully presented. A lovely work.

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