Jonathan ROBIN

Rookie - 211 Points (22 September / London)

Timely Open Book - Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

An attractive pair of eyes
of almond aspect, startling size,
sparkle with suggestive look
to signal “I’m an open book”
to which all welcome are who, wise,
rise, meet sweet challenge, find replies
the overhasty overlook.
Moreover, who their minds mistook
face value take where their own lies
make mirror image, dark disguise,
soon blot their ego's copybook -
self image wage, page books may cook.

From downturned mouth to upturned nose
verse flows until this tale we close.


22 June 2005 revised 5 December 2008


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for previous version entitled Open Book see below


Open Book

An attractive pair of eyes
of almond aspect, startling size,
sparkle with suggestive look
to signal “I’m an open book”
to which all welcome are who, wise,
rise, meet the challenge, find replies
that overhasty overlook,
while those face value take mistook
are where they make for their own lies
a mirror image, dark disguise –
and thus soon blot their copybook...


© Jonathan Robin – Sonnet written 22 June 2005


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 30, 2010


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