Timidity - A Curse Poem by Sanket Jain

Timidity - A Curse

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Remote area where there is no screen
Timidity rules alone trying to save skin.
Of all evils in the creation under discipline
Timidity - a curse - is like a Saccharin.
Sugary as tweet, booming as a violin
Wicked as a fox, ill-mannered as Bedouin;
Timidity sneaks secretly physique within
And remains there undisturbed and akin.
When obligatory duty or slog is seen
Sharpens us, whet us till found Lenin.
This makes us skinny, lanky and thin.
Living timid for me is no than a sin.
Hence precaution must be taken, O Kin!
Timidity, a severe knight, should not reign
Over us from beginning to let out jinn.

Timidity - A Curse
Saturday, June 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: monorhyme
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hope readers will like my creative way of writing a poem. I follow Monorhyme. I named it "Pari" - a style of writing Poetry where all ending words rhyme with one another at least in last sound.
This unique style is being recognized by many critics through some sites. Thanks to those invisible hands and fingers which supported and inspired me to continue my efforts in my new, creative, artistic and innovative "Pari" style.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2018

Of all evils in the creation under discipline Timidity - a curse - is like a Saccharin........Yes timidity shall not rule over us....... a fine poem giving us readers courage to overcome all forms of fear, ....... thank you dear poetess....... thank you also for the form Pari

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Oyeyemi Famodun 03 September 2017

Written beautifully and thoughtfully

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

Living timid for me is no than a sin. Hence precaution must be taken, O Kin! Timidity, a severe knight, should not reign Over us from beginning to let out jinn....great theme, I love these lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks.

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