Mubeen Sadhika


Tiny Rhyme - Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Fish oh! fish
swish a miss
wish on hiss
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Comments about Tiny Rhyme by Mubeen Sadhika

  • Rookie Robin D'Souza (4/8/2011 4:18:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so nonsensical...kind of like Dr. Seuss. I love Dr. Seuss.: D (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 0 Points Yaseen Anwer (12/7/2010 4:09:00 AM)

    Excellently penned. Good Luck ahead!

    Cheers!
    Yaseen Anwer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/28/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Excellent rhymes. You’ve done it.
    Rhymes are scaring please write more and more.
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Lingerie-IG*
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (10/19/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    this poem was a little funny
    good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brittany Rivera (10/10/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    I like that poem.Nice words, And, Good ryhme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Munia Khan (10/9/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Very impressive tiny lil work...I really enjoyed it a lot.10 is for sure from me...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Anthony Edmond John (10/2/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    Nice and illustrative Rhymes.. Nice work man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Opeyemi Borisade (9/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Mubeen,
    I read with my mind & it's now really twisted. Graet rhyming...good work! Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Villager Gulabo (9/29/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    a real gud poem....specially the rhyme wala part.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (9/29/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    This piece contains strong rhymes, nice to read especially to kids. Besides the lines are melodious, there are simple musical notes in it. Well done...cheers 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (9/28/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful, melodious and refreshing.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (9/28/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    Hey nice rhyme! ! ! ! ! ! This is fun to read..
    I guess you had great fun writing this poem too.. entertaining
    10++

    cheers
    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohammed Hassan (9/28/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    really nice rhyme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angelica Ayman (9/28/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    nice one, , like it
    keep it up, , , , , , , , , voted 10++++
    thx 4 charring
    ang. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shreya Chatterjee (9/28/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    dear,
    this was real cute...it reminded me of my childhood game of rhyming words and keep talking to myself in the process while I played alone with my toys...
    a trick to occupy myself
    a useful trick taught by my late grandfather
    a person who encouraged my to keep writing my mind out
    a person who indeed valued my funny thoughts
    and kept telling others, I was capable to doing good...
    with regards
    shreya...
    keep up he good work dear.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Latasha Hall (9/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    I like this one.............
    Very well written.
    This tied my tongue in 20 million knots.
    =D

    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krishnarasa Seshadri (9/28/2009 8:04:00 AM)

    full of onomatopoea...enjoyed having my tongue sshing about! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie bobby k (9/28/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    i'd wish to kissh that swishy fish,
    but fear that if i did,
    that i would get just slime 'n smelly
    on my cold wet lipsh!

    sooo cute and very Suessian! ! just wonderful for a childrens poetry book! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dejen (praxis) Kidane (9/28/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    i enjoyed it. i like the rhymes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Miranda Van Yperen (9/28/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    hahahahaha funny! great poem i really enjoyed it :) thanks (Report) Reply










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