Danny Draper

Rookie - 432 Points (14 July 1963 / Kiama, New South Wales, Australia)

Tiny Robot - Poem by Danny Draper

Tiny Robot Torygop Corp made
Programmed to perception of same,
No labor of effort to progress
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The 2013 federal election in Australia saw the leadership change to conservative Prime Minister Tony Abbot of the Australain Liberal Party.

Comments about Tiny Robot by Danny Draper

  • Gold Star - 10,434 Points Bri Edwards (10/19/2013 7:08:00 PM)

    i had a feeling somewhere along the line that it might have had to do with something other than a toy robot. hopefully my uncertainty can be blamed on my being secluded in california, away from the down under political scene......though i did read something about male versus female politics over there.
    i did enjoy the rhyming lines more than the non-rhyming lines so thanks for those!
    i believe you made an error which i have also made. So haves with impunity breath again. i believe an e ending is called for in second-to-the-last word. anyway, thanks for sharing. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (9/28/2013 11:53:00 PM)

    Hey Danny, glad to hear you didn't vote for him either. I was 'toying' with a poem too, but I couldn't have matched this! (Report) Reply








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