Tired Poem by Jacqui Broad

And this here just relaxed my mind very well, nice

Jacqui my heart melted like camphor and candle when i read your poetic line ' the lack of sleeping. your poem has sensitive heart like your bosom has! Let me pat your shoulder as compliment for writing this poem. I love you if only you write poems like this. Don't take it serious as it is fun time so a stream of smiles from you is the need of the hour! ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :) reciprocate my smiles right now!

Open the eyes of thy dream Where thou shalt see a stream- Of love-soakn' thee entirely; To reach unto my seven seas! ! ! If thou wert a mermaid, Would see the palace of my love! ! ! ! And would adorn the glint of my corals On thine fascinating fringes! ! ! ! Forget the tiredness of thy eyes And drown into my seas! ! (((for you Jacquilene) , I like your poem, , well written! ! !

I know just what your saying here. Really like this one. I know what its like to Want to sleep. A really great write.

Yes some things are better not seen...get some rest Miss Broad...ha ha ha!

Jac my friend should we warn you to sleep early...now u tired, dont over 'open your eyes' soon you got syndrome nocturnal.. hahaha i am joking have good rest. You should like Anele said below...there! _Unwritten Soul