Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 40 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Tired Feelings 01 - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Tired night like angel
Peeps from the window
Resurrection of memory

Tired soul missing fairy
Beamless dream wake up
Permutation of old life

Tired melancholy regret
Abducted imagination
Climbed up the memory

Comments about Tired Feelings 01 by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/30/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    excellent expression...wanted to know what makes you is a transient period which will give more energy... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/27/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    you express it well sir! ! ! ... and i v read many of your sweet ones, most of them help me to get over the tired feelings i have, some are in a way amusing and thought provoking...
    the case with many writers is that though they write good poems, they are not interesting enough, but your ones are entertaining.. you always keep the that factor alive...
    this sort of different earlier ones i v read, still the theme well expressed indeed..
    10+++ well deserved (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/26/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    reflexes...don't stop writing poems..add more..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Seema Aarella (6/26/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    the unique title drew me to read this...this unique write left me speechless.....and the tentacles of some ageold memories began to swathe me....slowly! ! ! !
    excellent write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/26/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful sir...................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (6/26/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Tired feelings do have the power to freshen up ones memories, nice poem, sir! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (6/26/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    'Tired Feelings' - beauty title, topic and whole. It is giving but the flight of possibility for the poet. Very good poem, I like it. Greetings :) (10 v.) Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/25/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    A tired night for the soul who is melancholy wanders in a room of limbo. Where memories float like sumbeams which makes one in a moment of depression...NIce written poem...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Priyanka Bhowmick (6/25/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    wow wonderful one...esp. the 1st one.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich2 (6/24/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    I got a bit tired reading this but then its meaning sank in. Nice poem with substance.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 3, 2009

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