Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

Rookie - 42 Points (December 6,1988 / Philippines)

..To Be Forever With You Never - Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

When I was but a withered leaf,
where art thou my love?
When air was scarce, I hardly breathe...
When I longed for you to be there,
yet you were there never.

When I was but a wasted stream,
did you ever think of me?
did I ever evade one of your dreams...
when I wished for you to be there,
yet you were there never.

When I was but a ruined song,
my love, where art thou?
you left me thinking all alone...
how you could be with me forever
when on my worst, you were never there.

15Sep2012


Comments about ..To Be Forever With You Never by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

  • Indranil Bhaduri (10/4/2012 9:23:00 AM)


    Fantastic piece of lines...emotional, romantic, touching hearts.. loved this. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/24/2012 6:22:00 AM)


    Wear out thy love and it will know solemn privations most unrequited. (Report) Reply

  • Manleh Castillo (9/24/2012 1:25:00 AM)


    ...each phrase captures my attention...indicative of improving one's attentiveness...thanks for sharing this.. (Report) Reply

  • (9/23/2012 7:01:00 AM)


    The beauty of the lines lies in the aptness of assumptions and conclusions made. The power of your imagination surfaces in your choice of themes (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2012 2:50:00 PM)


    so emotional and beautiful...each word with deep meaning is absolutely phenomenal it makes you wonder how love can bring you so much pain but yet it is the most desirable emotion........
    thank you so much for sharing mam,
    love
    payal
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 16, 2012


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