To Live. Poem by Aden Orie

To Live.



In a world filled with hate
I have to live my life
Before it is to late
A sinking debate
Inside of me
What is right was is wrong
The teaching's ive known
All along
To push on
To drive
To strive
For more
I know what is what
And thats for sure
Wait
Maybe im not as sure as i thaught i was
I'm living this life
Because?
What wakes me up?
What puts me to bed?
What keeps these thaughts?
Inside my head?
Is it me?
Was it me, all along?
Was i blind sited?
Am i still strong?
Do i look to what i was told?
Or do i let my life unfold?
Will i be alone
On the street
Will i only know
One heart beat?

IT IS ME IT IS ME
I'm different afterall
I'm still strong
I'm pure at times
Others i just move along
And do what i do
Evan though it is wrong

My heart and mind can teach me things
My soul and god can help me through
If this life
Were up to you
Whould you look at what you did wrong?
Whould you still stay strong?
Whould you push and push,
Until the feelings are gone?

Feelings of love
Feelings of hate
Feeling lost
Feeling found
YOU!
Can turn this life around.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Kreiner Sera 08 April 2009

Well written... 'In a world filled with hate, I have to live my life' poignant words of legacy gone wrong, and left to our Youth. You have style, keep writing - Cindy

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Suicidal Magic 04 April 2009

ooh i luv the power in those words ; ]

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