To Love A Snake Poem by Annie Velasquez

To Love A Snake

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The snake has lost his luster,
As his venom now I see,
Though his movements remain graceful
They intrigue even me

I sit still beside him waiting,
For what I am unsure,
I could once again be bitten,
But he's left me wanting more.

For now though he is resting,
And i watch with hoe in hand;
His strike I know, is sudden
But I too could take a stand...

Dear serpent, rest your eyes
Don't mind this battered hoe
Know for you, I've been so loyal;
With peaceful sleep I pray you go.

Sunday, February 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,loyalty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 14 May 2016

serpent is the symbol of the forbidden fruit. please turn away from these attacks or try to resist if you do not prefer- thanks for sharing such a beautiful craft

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Roseann Shawiak 07 February 2016

Great analogy, using the snake as a sign of betrayal is very apropos. Your poem flowed and slithered gracefully through my mind as I read it, very well written. Loyalty is a tribute to the person you are within.10+++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Annie Velasquez 03 May 2016

exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much for your foresight.

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