Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,259 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

To My Dear Dentist! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

This poem on my dentist
Who brought my smile back.

Went to doctor with my visible teeth
All hooked and crooked
Full of maps and gaps and smiles with colourful cheese
My smile looked good from far but very bad from near.

Doctor said
Front two teethe looked like punched back
Two molars lifted upwards
All front teeth stood in crooked way
For that he will bring all teethes in semi circle

Now the caps were ready
No one can beat the teeth caps
They looked original too
More beautiful they looked than my original ones
Now caps were inserted
Many after seeing my smile
Said now your teethes are good
Polished and flashy too
But don't ever smile
As you lost your charming smile.

The two teeth punched look good
Now your teeth changed your face structure too,
So frustrated I got
After hearing from everyone
I called doctor
But he was cool ever.

He said your teeth are good and proper too
I said doctor
Cant you punch my teeth back
And lift those side tooth.
All told me I looked beautiful in hooked and crooked smile only.
He convinced me and made few changes
Now I practising how to smile with new teeth
As now I cant have same smile
Still I am trying my level best to smile.

Doctor said now
Show your smiley teeth to your friends
Whoever not satisfied bring them back to my clinic
I think now they need a treatment of punishment.

Ha Ha made me smile!


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I told my dentist that I wrote a poem on him.

Comments about To My Dear Dentist! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 38,829 Points Akhtar Jawad (4/7/2015 8:44:00 PM)

    I have been inspired by this entertaining poem to write a poem on my teeth but I am facing a problem. Should I write a poem on 17 teeth that I lost or I should write a poem on the remaining 15. Enjoyed this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,451 Points Lyn Paul (6/21/2014 9:05:00 PM)

    Thank you Geetha for sharing your Dear Dentist visit. How brave you are for sharing and for sitting in his chair. Loved your smiling humour and the words of The Dentist. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,848 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/21/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    A nice tribute to a dentist who made your teeth sparkle like sun and smile like pearls of sea hidden in paradise...
    a great write......Geetha......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,074 Points Valsa George (6/21/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Oh Geetha, so you have made a triumphant comeback with a wonderful facelft too...! If possible, change your profile picture with another one having a gleaming smile, parading your new pearly teeth! Enjoyed the humour! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,954 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/19/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    ha ha made me smile too, but it has a meaning .. good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/19/2014 10:39:00 AM)

    Haha! Love the humorous ending! I tend to think of smiles like snowflakes. Each one is unique and helps to define the face of the person who wears it! An enjoyable read! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 19, 2014



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