To My Rhyme. Poem by Lizzy Tomlinson

To My Rhyme.

Rating: 5.0


My pen is running dry now,
The ink is fading fast,
I want to finish writing,
But I don't think it will last.

I'm in an awful quandary,
I don't know what I'll do.
If it happens before I'm finished,
'Cause I won't remember yo...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 31 May 2006

Lizzy, I like the unfinished ending as the ink ran out, and how sometimes relationships end the same way... empty. Good write! ! Brian

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Danny Reynolds 26 March 2006

(; -) Nudge nudge. Danny.

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Lizzy Tomlinson

Lizzy Tomlinson

Dundee, Scotland.
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