To Reveal Poem by Tapas Baidya

To Reveal

Rating: 5.0


With some birds
Some tiny flowers
And some unuttered words
I presented me to you
And apathetically you refused

But my agony was gleaming
On your eye-lids to illuminate me

Anxiously I was only
Counting the pulses of time
Suddenly you expressed aggressively -
'Where is your poem in this exhibition?
What I want might be got from that.'

Believe
I realize a poet in me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 26 August 2008

unuttered words..... pulse of time..... perfect phrase to use. well done. you are indeed a good poet with a nice heart and good thoughts to share with all. take care

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2008

...verses are emitting thoughts here...fine! .....10

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