To The Critic Poem by Christable Anon

To The Critic

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The world has washed
Its body in the gurgle down the stiff bodies
Interspersed in climate and cloud of the green bones
The world has chosen me

An organ within bleeding
with plush impulse
and metonymy
of a cult-fused moon
thriving on electric shoot
charged from its throat

all fingers in music
all fingers strumming the basics
to watch him cry
to watch him seasoning in the sun…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

Intersting and well written piece

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Moses Kilolo 09 November 2009

chosen by the world? Seasoning in the sun... apparently I find it rather surprising that there is only the music, and no mention of its reason. the basics - yes. beautiful.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 08 November 2009

this one is good........

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