Vasto Grom

Rookie - 10 Points (01/19/1990 / Houston, TX)

To The Fallen - Poem by Vasto Grom

Upon this beautiful web of lies
I sleep and rest my head
Unbeknownst to all the other
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Topic(s) of this poem: death

Comments about To The Fallen by Vasto Grom

  • (3/10/2014 10:11:00 PM)

    this is beautiful! I love it (Report) Reply

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  • Dean Bottomley (3/10/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem both in sentiment and construction (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. I think I would edit it:
    The me they knew is dead

    (I would take out 'that' in the beginning of line 4.)
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  • (3/9/2013 11:56:00 AM)

    The others are right. A fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    Very good and I can relate to it but don't think I could have expressed it so well.Gillian Commerford (Report) Reply

  • Mark Dillon (3/9/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Very well written, short and concise.Only we know in our hearts who we truely are, only those outside know what we choose to show them.The world is a stage and we play many characters in our interaction with our fellow man. (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    Vasto brilliant. The me they knew died. But the you, you know lives, beyond the poem, seeping through the pores of sky and winds. Classic. (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2012 8:43:00 PM)

    Few words... but a big message! The inner connect is something we all pusue, the journey is very painful and ardous... but the destination very rewarding. Well writtten. Would love for you to please take out time to critique some of my poems. (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2012 11:42:00 AM)

    Wow, I love this. I hope you find meaning to your life; with poetry like this, you deserve it (Report) Reply

  • ! Ang3l! Bye Poemhunter For Now (1/31/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    wow i tho i was deep (Report) Reply

  • (1/31/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    Wow deep. i really like this. Love if you would critique some of my poetry. (Report) Reply

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