Vasto Grom

Rookie - 0 Points (01/19/1990 / Houston, TX)

To The Fallen


Upon this beautiful web of lies
I sleep and rest my head
Unbeknownst to all the other
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Topic of this poem: death

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  • Rookie Patricia Saunders (3/9/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. I think I would edit it:
    The me they knew is dead

    (I would take out 'that' in the beginning of line 4.) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (3/9/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Very well written, short and concise.Only we know in our hearts who we truely are, only those outside know what we choose to show them.The world is a stage and we play many characters in our interaction with our fellow man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/9/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    Vasto brilliant. The me they knew died. But the you, you know lives, beyond the poem, seeping through the pores of sky and winds. Classic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yamini Khanna (3/10/2012 8:43:00 PM)

    Few words... but a big message! The inner connect is something we all pusue, the journey is very painful and ardous... but the destination very rewarding. Well writtten. Would love for you to please take out time to critique some of my poems. (Report) Reply

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