To 'The Ocean Of Love' Poem by Khairul Ahsan

To 'The Ocean Of Love'

Rating: 4.6


My poems, perhaps reach you no more,
My words come back from your door,
Unread and unheard.
I pick them up, can't look at their eyes,
Set them free, to fly away to the skies,
My eyes get blurred.

My messages, too, are welcome no more,
They are not eagerly awaited, as before,
With as much ardor.
There is no way that I can call them back,
As their voyage was on a one way track,
So, they'll wait in the harbor............

Of 'The Ocean of Love'!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Jasmine 02 December 2013

Passionate. Clear. Perfect! I really liked it. Despite the fact that it's short, the message is clear. A ten from me!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2020

Messages and passages! ! ! Sages of love and life; Still waiting! On stage with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gary H 29 December 2013

wow just awesome, so well done sir.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2018

Thank you Gary, much inspired by your appreciation.

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Connie Yost 15 December 2013

I sincerely hope your poems and messages and feelings do not have to wait in that vast 'ocean of love' for too long a time. This poem touches the heart and soul, beautifully.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2018

Thank you so much, @Connie Yost. I am glad to know that the poem touched you. I do not see any poem in your page. Where have they disappeared?

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Ebi Robert 13 December 2013

its beautiful....i like particularly the style.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2018

Thank you, @Ebi Robert, for your comment. Much inspired by your appreciation.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2013

very stirring poem...longing me very..nicely done 10/10

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Khairul Ahsan 12 July 2018

Thank you, @Musfiq Us Shaleheen, for your appreciative comment and generous rating of the poem.

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