Mike Barrett

Freshman - 918 Points (June,1943 / Saint John, New Brunswick, Canada)

To You A Word - Poem by Mike Barrett

Have not
To wait
For mysteries
And secret rites
And things
To be revealed
To us
Before we do
The works
Of God.

NO Way!

Have only
To love
One another
And serve
One another
Remembering always
That the self
And the other are one.

Does not ask
That we become perfect -
That we love
And serve
The oneness

© M. Barrett – all rights reserved

Comments about To You A Word by Mike Barrett

  • Rookie - 386 Points Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (10/21/2014 1:53:00 PM)

    Simple truth stylistically conveyed. I doff for your pen. (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 918 Points Mike Barrett (10/21/2014 2:45:00 PM)

    Hi, thanks for your comment....I'm pleased that you appreciated this poem. Cheers!

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  • Freshman - 918 Points Mike Barrett (3/8/2014 1:25:00 PM)

    Hi Rachel, Thanks for your comment, I've been busy with other interests and responsibilities lately and haven't been on the PH site as much as used to, but I will return down the road. Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 918 Points Mike Barrett (3/8/2014 1:21:00 PM)

    Hi Valsa, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem and thank you for your comment. Much appreciated! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,330 Points * Sunprincess * (3/5/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    ..........a beautiful message...and I agree...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (3/4/2014 9:37:00 AM)

    ....So true, Mike! Man is born with frailties. So he cannot be perfect! But however imperfect we are, all of us can love each other and that is what God counts.... I fully endorse your views.... am inspired by the message! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 23, 2013

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