Today's Children Poem by Queeny Gona

Today's Children

Rating: 4.9


Pale-scale, almost lifeless
Resembling the ones
Placed on coffin
For bidding
Farewell!

No passer by
Can ignore their sigh
So did I give my best strive
To ease their belly for a while
Pulled my collar and counted it a pride!

Whoops! Few steps ahead
Shattered my brains
To face glut hands
All around, I
Stepped!

Remote village to hi-tech city
The scene repeats allover
Earlier helplessness
But today it’s a
Huge mafia!

Come on!
End this flight
Let the world fight
For Children’s right
To curb the evil straight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laquory Jones 26 May 2017

Wow, Deep, and Intense Poem. I could sense your emotion from within it, Thanks for sharing Queeny +10

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Queeny Gona 26 May 2017

Thank you for your valuable comments dear poet!

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Jitesh Shah 25 March 2014

lovely poem of children love and also read my poem

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Every child is entitled proper care, education, nutritious food to grown well and to become a responsible citizen. Decades ago things were different when children were a neglected lot. Now things are improved. A relevant poem and likes it.

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Paul Warren 26 May 2017

Interesting poem about children in your experience. Different to Australia but your poem is structured to imagery of a hard life. Any way a good poem.

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Hazel Durham 26 May 2017

To stand up against the terrible poverty that children have to face and the sinister forces that use innocent children for their own evil advantage is a scandalous situation that has been overlooked for too long! Powerful, hard-hitting and great write! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 May 2017

This is one side of the picture. The great poetess Pervin Shakir shows the other side. She says, jugnu ko din ke waqt parakhne ki zid karen. Bachche hamare ehad ke chalak ho gae, i.e. Today's children are so clever that they insist to analyse the fire fly at day time. Thanks

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Queeny Gona 26 May 2017

Very true that the other side of the picture is splendid that they are doing marvelous job. On encountering a weird situation as portrayed in the poem I couldn't resist my self to raise voice for those vulnerable children. Thank you for the educative comments dear poet pal!

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Upendra Upm 26 May 2017

Good poem. Robert Malthus said, food will grow in arithmetic progression and children population in geometric progression.The planet earth by its fecundity and God by HIs ingenuous magnanimity can handle that but selfishness, greed and cruelty of mischievous will pose problem,

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Queeny Gona 26 May 2017

I agree with your lines sir. It is the selfishness and greed of human that is the major cause behind present crisis.

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