=(Together Poem by Ashley Nichol

=(Together

Rating: 5.0


something just isnt right.
i can feel it inside.
the truth isnt far behind me
you cant deny
when i turn the lights out
when i close my eyes
reality over comes me
im living a lie
when im alone
i feel so much better
when im wrapped in you
i dont feel loved
together doesnt feel right anymore
together we have built a wall
together holding hands will fall
our hands will fall...
this has gone on oh so long
i realize i need something good to rely on
something for me
together doesnt feel right at all
heart is broken
im lying here
my thoughts are choking
when im around you i dont feel any love
when im not around you
i feel so much more free
together is just not where we belong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marissa Hollis 19 August 2009

this one is good too. i feel like im playing a role in the story behind this poem. all in all awesome writing skills, ashley

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