Tomorrow's Doom Poem by venessa ambrose

Tomorrow's Doom

Rating: 5.0


If tomorrow brings a life with out you, then let time freeze in its sand
And its blade forever halt!

If tomorrow brings a life without you, then I will savor the last bit of our parting kiss, immortalized by the yearns of my bleeding soul

If tomorrows holds not a place for us, then I wish to bleed by your thrust and fade by the dawn!

If ever tomorrow roars in claims
Then I long to remain with you as our youth is swept by the tick tuck blade!

If the veil of times holds us not for tomorrow
I wish to be washed by the tides
Of rapid illusion.

If there be a tomorrow without you
Then I will rid the world of such tomorrows and dwell in eternal today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 17 June 2012

Brilliant! A well crafted and touching write that clearly shows Beauty and Talent magically merged in this beautiful work! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up my dear friend Vanessa! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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