Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 4,259 Points (Kolkata)

Too Cute... - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

an infatuation grew in me.....outmoded..outlandish...illogically about a short love story..?

And got hooked
who is the crook?
That lad not so cute
Yet managed his looks
To cut the clasp of books.

Ha! and I stood still
Could manage a skill
To urge for a bill
Horn and lock for a drill

Man you are mad!
After that I am sad
Who is labelled bad?
This close connection
Has made us true glad.

A shake of his hand
For it we laid a brand
We stood in air or land
The time flew like sand.

Can I ask -Do you miss?
Can I exchange -Yes I miss.
This all fuss is just a mess
We are far in age and flesh.

Topic(s) of this poem: love educates

Comments about Too Cute... by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Gold Star - 12,620 Points Souren Mondal (11/17/2015 3:09:00 AM)

    Franklu, not as good as the other poems of yours that I have read, but it does speak of something really valuable... Love always begins with infatuation and if it doesn't change from their into something more mature and rational... Ya, it's complicated. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 5, 2014

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